My first true love; My first true heartbreak.

The Chapters are short. This story is actually and self essay I wrote for class and got two 4s on. (If you're not familiar with the #grade system it means I got 2 A+s.) And I got a lot of positive feedback from the friends and teachers I let read it. I wanted some feedback from people who don't know me personally. Be as harsh as you'd like. I can take it. (=