Gifted.
Gifted. [#50]
I was walking home
from Finley's house
at about half ten
at night
when all of a sudden
this man ran at me
he smelled like a dead dog
and he had a beard
with food stuck in it
at first
I thought
he was a
tramp
until I realised
it was my dad
and then
I noticed
the knife
so I started to run
as fast
and as far away
as I could
but I could still hear him
panting behind me
I didn't check how
close he was
because that would
slow
me
down
and that was the
last
thing I wanted
so I was running
running
running
over the road
and the last thing I heard
was the screech of tires
and an ear-splitting scream
I think it was mine.
The End.
from Finley's house
at about half ten
at night
when all of a sudden
this man ran at me
he smelled like a dead dog
and he had a beard
with food stuck in it
at first
I thought
he was a
tramp
until I realised
it was my dad
and then
I noticed
the knife
so I started to run
as fast
and as far away
as I could
but I could still hear him
panting behind me
I didn't check how
close he was
because that would
slow
me
down
and that was the
last
thing I wanted
so I was running
running
running
over the road
and the last thing I heard
was the screech of tires
and an ear-splitting scream
I think it was mine.
The End.
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i don't like the ending to this story at all.