Archangel's Chagrin

Okay, so this is just a goof. I actually am rather addicted to the Guild Hunter Series by Nalini Singh. But, while I love the world she built, what with all the angels flapping about and the vampires being badass and my secret hope to one day become a guild hunter, there seems to be certain cringe-worthy aspects to Elena and Raphael's love story.

So, I highlighted some of them to make a point. Also, there's a surprise ending. Enjoy!