Status: Keep, scrap, or kill?

The Not So Fairytale Story of Imogen and Her Hunter

I wrote this because I was so bored it was painful. I had to find something to do so this story, thing, whatever spilled from my cluttered mind. Tell me if you like it or hate. Let me know if I should keep it, scrap it, put it on the shelf for later, or kill it and bury it deep in the woods never to be found again. Be honest, I promise I won't get mad. :)

Anyway, on with the intro. This is set in the medieval era. I'm creating my own setting by picking and choosing different elements in history to incorporate into this time period, hence the fantasy genre. Don't worry it's not one of those stories with modern technology mixed with knights in shining armor. Everything is from the general time period however I'll probably end up mixing and matching things from different centuries to create the setting I want. Read the first chapter for a sort of background and introduction.
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