Black Dagger Brotherhood-Lover What?

Another note-but of another kind

Note:

I really need some sort of feedback. Pleeeeeeaaase? When I don't have any kind of feedback, for any of my writing, my motivation for it starts to dwindle because I think that no one really has any thoughts on it, or they don't really like it. So please prove me wrong and show me that you have some kind of thoughts on this so I can keep writing, whether the comments are good or bad. If they're good, yay! If they're bad, then I'll try and fix what is wrong.

P.S.-If you notice there are any: missing words, extra words, words that are supposed to be capitalized but aren't, words that are capitalized but shouldn't be, extra letters, missing letters, words that should have a space between them,...basically if there's anything wrong, let me know that chapter and about where it is so I can fix it and make the reading better for future readers. Thank you and pleeeeeeaaaaaaase comment!
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