Status: feedback would be great!!!!! and im open to any type of critizism, really, i beilve it makes a person a better write regardless of how bad it may be
A Cold Loveless Life
Patrick, “there is no way this will work, she is a vampire!”
Pete, “well on the Brightside, if she does try to kill us we can die quickly.”
Patrick, “that’s not a Brightside!.”
Pete, “ it’s not?”
Pete, “well on the Brightside, if she does try to kill us we can die quickly.”
Patrick, “that’s not a Brightside!.”
Pete, “ it’s not?”
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chapter 1
no descriptions because im just really bad at them so read it please!!! lol -
chapter 2
goes deeper into the insight of Irie's thought and views -
Chapter 3-Roma
introduces Irie's "sister" as well as explains the different out looks they have on the whole vampire thing - Chapter 4
- Chapter 5- enter a planned life
- Chapter 6- Living in the Present
- Chapter 7- strange meetings and holy water
- Chapter 8- explanations & funny offers