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The Key Chased the Blade

Noah is a tough girl; she isn't afraid of a lot of things. But when people in her town disappear and turn up dead, she and her best friend Simon get afraid fast. Noah begins seeing a mysterious person in her dreams and realizes that they have something sick to do with all of this. That's when Noah and Simon are thrown head-first into a paranormal race with death; a race where they both might die if they don't finish before the murderer.

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-If you're here for a comment swap, I know this is long. I'd absolutely love it if you'd give me some full-blown edit/feedback, but reading a few chapters and giving feedback is cool too.

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