Status: New idea. Keep or get rid of?
The Shadows of the Danger Line
Deadly Mistakes
“Hey! Get back here you brat!” yelled a furious police officer as he chased after a young teenage
girl. He had been after the brat for months, but every time he thought he had come close to
cornering the teen she disappeared.The girl continued weaving through the back allies her heart
racing as she focused on what was ahead of her. She smirked seeing a closed dumpster near
the upcoming fifteen foot tall chain link feet. She quickly jumped onto the dumpster before
ascending the fence. She jumped down her feet hitting the concrete pavement gracefully before
she continues on her attempt to evade the officer. She knew he wouldn’t bother climbing the
fence to come after her and her thoughts were confirmed when she heard him shouting curses
into the air. She pulled the hood up on her old tattered hoodie covering her dirty blonde hair and
shielding her hazel eyes from the blazing California sun. The back alleys of California were not
safe for anyone let alone the thirteen year old girl that had inhabited them for the past two
years. She had learned quickly how to survive on these streets: make friends with who you can
especially local gangs, be quick on your feet, avoid cops, and never cross Avenged Sevenfold.
She, herself, had never seen Avenged Sevenfold, but she knew they ruled the streets, and the
few people that were dumb enough to cross them were dead. She glanced up at the sky it would
be getting dark soon and that meant a bunch of drunken idiots that would be easy for her to
pick-pocket. She decided to go into the local music shop to escape the heat for now. Most people
would tell her maybe she wouldn’t be so hot if she didn’t wear her hoodie all the time, but she
wore the hoodie to cover the scars that covered her arms from the tragic accident that took her
mother’s life.
“Dakota, lass, I thought somethin’ happ’n to ya” said Mr. Keegan the local music shop keeper. He
was an older gentleman in his fifties that had taken a liking to having the teen’s company. “Sorry,
Mr. Keegan, I’ve been busy” she replied with an innocent shrug. “Get that damn hoodie off before
you give yourself a heat stroke” he scolded the teen. “But..” “No, buts lass I’ve seen the scars
before. I told ya they are nothin’ to be ashamed of. It just means you were stronger than
whatever hurt ya” he said giving the teen a stern look. Dakota knew there was no use in arguing
with the Irish old man; he was stubborn as a mule! She carefully slipped the hoodie off revealing
her purple v-neck shirt and causing the light to catch the necklace hanging around her neck.
She never knew what the necklace stood for it was a bat with wings. Her mother had said it was
her father’s and Dakota never took it off, but she did keep it hidden under her shirt. She tucked it
inside her shirt to where the chain was just showing. “I have some new clothes for ya, Kota. Just
go play the piano. I know that’s why you’re here while I go get the clothes” he told her. She
nodded before taking a seat in front of the beautiful grand piano located in the shop. Her fingers
immediately went to the keys as let her eyes fall closed. Her fingers danced flawlessly over the
keys as a beautiful melody flowed throughout the shop. Her mother had always told her she had
gotten her love for music from her father. Apparently, she reminded her mother of her father
often. She wished she could know the man that she was often compared to on many occasions.
“I really wish you would take up my offer and stay with me Kota” said Mr. Keegan as he
reentered the room with a bag of clothes for the teen. “I can’t Mr. Keegan too many cops come
through here and if they find me they will send me back to foster care” she explained. “Well, my
wife says, you better come by for your schooling when summer time is over, lass” he warned “I
know, I promised her I would and I am going to” she said. His wife was a high school teacher
and she refused to let someone as brilliant as the young teen to let their brain waste away.
“Lass, you better head out the back” muttered Mr. Keegan as he saw local cops heading toward
the shop. “Thanks, Mr. Keegan, I’ll see ya around” she said slipping her hoodie back on and
grabbing the bag of clothes from him. “Stay safe!” he called before heading to the front desk.
She did not reply as she headed out the back door knowing that it was too dangerous to stay
there any longer.
Dakota leaned against the side wall of a local bar as she watched drunken idiots stumble in and
out the bar. She had already made a bit of money from these people without them being aware
of her actions at all. They did not take notice to the teen at all. They were too busy having fun
and getting waste to notice her. Her muscles tensed as she saw a figure approaching her. She
waited for the figure to be revealed by the street light before moving, but she was ready to bolt
at any time. “Kota!” greeted Ethan, another street kid, she had known for about a year now. He
was sixteen and had helped her a lot in the past. “E” she greeted casually wondering what the
boy was up to on this night. She usually ended up in trouble when he came around. “I have a job
for you that would leave us both set for a while” he explained “What is it?” she questioned
curiously. “There’s this drug dealer one street over and he’s made quite a lot tonight. All you
have to do is pick-pocket him after I knock into him by accident” he told her. “No way, you are
trying to get us killed” she replied to the teen. “Come on, Dakota, you are the best pick-pocket
around and you are as fast as lightning” he pleaded with her. “I know you hate stealing from
people and think about it this way. You would be helping people by stealing the money that awful
drug dealer makes by selling that poison to people” he reasoned. Dakota sighed mentally
debating what she should do. “Fine, if we die I am going to annoy you for the rest of our lives as
ghost” she muttered as she followed after him. She did not like this idea, but it seemed
reasonable.
She felt her heart race as she spotted the dealer that she was supposed to be pick-pocketing. He
had spiky black hair and he wore a black v-neck with dark wash jeans. Ink covered his arms that
were quite muscular. “E is trying to get me killed” she mumbled to herself as she slowly walked
down the street. She waited patiently for Ethan to come running around the corner. He was
going to be her distraction. She took a deep breath as she spotted him coming around the
corner. She got into position and right as he knocked into the man she stole the money out of his
back pocket. The man was busy cussing Ethan as he ran off to notice her for the moment, but it
did not take long for him to realize that the roll of money that had been in his back pocket was
gone. Datoka took off in a sprint as soon as the man’s eyes fell on her. She knew she was dead
meat now. She silently prayed that she would not be caught by the man as she dashed through a
crowd of people and into the back alleys of the streets. She could hear the loud footsteps of the
man as he chased after her. She ran faster as she heard the crack of a gunshot and the sound of
a bullet whistling passed her. She cut down another alley before sliding into the basement of an
old building through an open window. She hid silently in the basement as she heard the man run
pass. Her heart was pounding and her hands were trembling with fear hoping that she would
survive the night.
She waited for an hour before she climbed out of her hiding spot in the building. She kept
glancing over her shoulder as she headed back to the abandon theatre she called home. She
turned hearing footsteps and spotted Ethan knowing he was here for his cut. “You idiot! I could
have been killed!” she shouted harshly at him her hazel eyes glaring daggers at him. “You did it
Dakota! You pick-pocketed Avenged Sevenfold!” he exclaimed. Her heart skipped a beat and a
chill ran down her spine at the sound of that name. “You just signed my death certificate!” she
spat at the older teen. “They are going to hunt me down!” Her mind started racing as she plotted
her escape plan from the city. She threw some of the money at Ethan “Don’t ever ask for my
help again” she said before walking off. She was no longer safe on the streets. She had to lay
low and get out of this state.
girl. He had been after the brat for months, but every time he thought he had come close to
cornering the teen she disappeared.The girl continued weaving through the back allies her heart
racing as she focused on what was ahead of her. She smirked seeing a closed dumpster near
the upcoming fifteen foot tall chain link feet. She quickly jumped onto the dumpster before
ascending the fence. She jumped down her feet hitting the concrete pavement gracefully before
she continues on her attempt to evade the officer. She knew he wouldn’t bother climbing the
fence to come after her and her thoughts were confirmed when she heard him shouting curses
into the air. She pulled the hood up on her old tattered hoodie covering her dirty blonde hair and
shielding her hazel eyes from the blazing California sun. The back alleys of California were not
safe for anyone let alone the thirteen year old girl that had inhabited them for the past two
years. She had learned quickly how to survive on these streets: make friends with who you can
especially local gangs, be quick on your feet, avoid cops, and never cross Avenged Sevenfold.
She, herself, had never seen Avenged Sevenfold, but she knew they ruled the streets, and the
few people that were dumb enough to cross them were dead. She glanced up at the sky it would
be getting dark soon and that meant a bunch of drunken idiots that would be easy for her to
pick-pocket. She decided to go into the local music shop to escape the heat for now. Most people
would tell her maybe she wouldn’t be so hot if she didn’t wear her hoodie all the time, but she
wore the hoodie to cover the scars that covered her arms from the tragic accident that took her
mother’s life.
“Dakota, lass, I thought somethin’ happ’n to ya” said Mr. Keegan the local music shop keeper. He
was an older gentleman in his fifties that had taken a liking to having the teen’s company. “Sorry,
Mr. Keegan, I’ve been busy” she replied with an innocent shrug. “Get that damn hoodie off before
you give yourself a heat stroke” he scolded the teen. “But..” “No, buts lass I’ve seen the scars
before. I told ya they are nothin’ to be ashamed of. It just means you were stronger than
whatever hurt ya” he said giving the teen a stern look. Dakota knew there was no use in arguing
with the Irish old man; he was stubborn as a mule! She carefully slipped the hoodie off revealing
her purple v-neck shirt and causing the light to catch the necklace hanging around her neck.
She never knew what the necklace stood for it was a bat with wings. Her mother had said it was
her father’s and Dakota never took it off, but she did keep it hidden under her shirt. She tucked it
inside her shirt to where the chain was just showing. “I have some new clothes for ya, Kota. Just
go play the piano. I know that’s why you’re here while I go get the clothes” he told her. She
nodded before taking a seat in front of the beautiful grand piano located in the shop. Her fingers
immediately went to the keys as let her eyes fall closed. Her fingers danced flawlessly over the
keys as a beautiful melody flowed throughout the shop. Her mother had always told her she had
gotten her love for music from her father. Apparently, she reminded her mother of her father
often. She wished she could know the man that she was often compared to on many occasions.
“I really wish you would take up my offer and stay with me Kota” said Mr. Keegan as he
reentered the room with a bag of clothes for the teen. “I can’t Mr. Keegan too many cops come
through here and if they find me they will send me back to foster care” she explained. “Well, my
wife says, you better come by for your schooling when summer time is over, lass” he warned “I
know, I promised her I would and I am going to” she said. His wife was a high school teacher
and she refused to let someone as brilliant as the young teen to let their brain waste away.
“Lass, you better head out the back” muttered Mr. Keegan as he saw local cops heading toward
the shop. “Thanks, Mr. Keegan, I’ll see ya around” she said slipping her hoodie back on and
grabbing the bag of clothes from him. “Stay safe!” he called before heading to the front desk.
She did not reply as she headed out the back door knowing that it was too dangerous to stay
there any longer.
Dakota leaned against the side wall of a local bar as she watched drunken idiots stumble in and
out the bar. She had already made a bit of money from these people without them being aware
of her actions at all. They did not take notice to the teen at all. They were too busy having fun
and getting waste to notice her. Her muscles tensed as she saw a figure approaching her. She
waited for the figure to be revealed by the street light before moving, but she was ready to bolt
at any time. “Kota!” greeted Ethan, another street kid, she had known for about a year now. He
was sixteen and had helped her a lot in the past. “E” she greeted casually wondering what the
boy was up to on this night. She usually ended up in trouble when he came around. “I have a job
for you that would leave us both set for a while” he explained “What is it?” she questioned
curiously. “There’s this drug dealer one street over and he’s made quite a lot tonight. All you
have to do is pick-pocket him after I knock into him by accident” he told her. “No way, you are
trying to get us killed” she replied to the teen. “Come on, Dakota, you are the best pick-pocket
around and you are as fast as lightning” he pleaded with her. “I know you hate stealing from
people and think about it this way. You would be helping people by stealing the money that awful
drug dealer makes by selling that poison to people” he reasoned. Dakota sighed mentally
debating what she should do. “Fine, if we die I am going to annoy you for the rest of our lives as
ghost” she muttered as she followed after him. She did not like this idea, but it seemed
reasonable.
She felt her heart race as she spotted the dealer that she was supposed to be pick-pocketing. He
had spiky black hair and he wore a black v-neck with dark wash jeans. Ink covered his arms that
were quite muscular. “E is trying to get me killed” she mumbled to herself as she slowly walked
down the street. She waited patiently for Ethan to come running around the corner. He was
going to be her distraction. She took a deep breath as she spotted him coming around the
corner. She got into position and right as he knocked into the man she stole the money out of his
back pocket. The man was busy cussing Ethan as he ran off to notice her for the moment, but it
did not take long for him to realize that the roll of money that had been in his back pocket was
gone. Datoka took off in a sprint as soon as the man’s eyes fell on her. She knew she was dead
meat now. She silently prayed that she would not be caught by the man as she dashed through a
crowd of people and into the back alleys of the streets. She could hear the loud footsteps of the
man as he chased after her. She ran faster as she heard the crack of a gunshot and the sound of
a bullet whistling passed her. She cut down another alley before sliding into the basement of an
old building through an open window. She hid silently in the basement as she heard the man run
pass. Her heart was pounding and her hands were trembling with fear hoping that she would
survive the night.
She waited for an hour before she climbed out of her hiding spot in the building. She kept
glancing over her shoulder as she headed back to the abandon theatre she called home. She
turned hearing footsteps and spotted Ethan knowing he was here for his cut. “You idiot! I could
have been killed!” she shouted harshly at him her hazel eyes glaring daggers at him. “You did it
Dakota! You pick-pocketed Avenged Sevenfold!” he exclaimed. Her heart skipped a beat and a
chill ran down her spine at the sound of that name. “You just signed my death certificate!” she
spat at the older teen. “They are going to hunt me down!” Her mind started racing as she plotted
her escape plan from the city. She threw some of the money at Ethan “Don’t ever ask for my
help again” she said before walking off. She was no longer safe on the streets. She had to lay
low and get out of this state.
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This idea has been weaving it's way through my mind for a while. Please comment and tell me what you think.~Jess