Status: Don't know if I'm writing well from a guy's perspective, reviews on that would be great!

Mismatched and Hyperfocused

Jacob Hannigan is a waiter at a little diner type place. Life is hum drum as usual, until a girl shows up at the place. Right now I only have the first chapter and don't know where it is going yet so a long summary would be awfully hard to do. I will return comments, let me know what story you want me to comment on.