Clive & Layla

I'm not sure if I'm gonna carry through with this so I would be surprised if I don't finish it. I'm writing each part in a separate point of view, tell me what you think. The more compliments I get, the more motivation I have to continue my story. As you might be able to tell none of this was writen prior to typing. Basically I'm making it up as I go.
Anyway this story is about a murder that took place one night. A group of friends go to a party and....eh you'll find out my words aren't functioning the way I want them to, sorry.