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The 22nd Century
So this is a story I wrote four years ago. I wanted to edit it a little bit, seeing as I completely abandoned it unfinished and I feel really really bad. No ones gonna read this but I'll just keep this up here. If people actually read it then I might continue it idk
I like this story a lot more now, it's not as cringey as before lmao
"Looking at his wrist, his watch said 000:05:36:12. So apparently, in five hours or so, he would meet his ‘soul mate’. What if his soul mate didn’t at all like him? Which was most likely. Not that he cared. There were not many people who took a liking to Kellin, or maybe it was the other way around. Because Kellin didn’t like most people either. Kellin never knew when to keep his mouth shut; he came with rude comments and sarcastic replies to almost everything. He was good at starting fights and arguments."
I like this story a lot more now, it's not as cringey as before lmao
"Looking at his wrist, his watch said 000:05:36:12. So apparently, in five hours or so, he would meet his ‘soul mate’. What if his soul mate didn’t at all like him? Which was most likely. Not that he cared. There were not many people who took a liking to Kellin, or maybe it was the other way around. Because Kellin didn’t like most people either. Kellin never knew when to keep his mouth shut; he came with rude comments and sarcastic replies to almost everything. He was good at starting fights and arguments."