Living for the Car Crashed Hearts

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This is a story that I started writing 5 years ago and after all this time I decided to work on it more. I really could use some feedback because I've been out of the fanfic scene for a while now. Whatever you have to say I appreciate it and hopefully this will catch a couple peoples eyes enough to inspire me enough to keep writing.
  1. Say a Prayer, The Summer Nights are Dead
    Ch.1. Sometimes fate brings two people together
  2. She Screams in Silence
    It's Patrick's last night in town so he decides to take one last stroll through the peaceful Ohio park but little does he know that he's about to get more than he bargained for...
  3. Kicking And Screaming, Yet Pretending We Were Wrong…
    It starts all over again, the hectic life that he had forgotten... Patrick can only handle so much, but will the guys be upset due to his procrastination?