An Immature Love

I've been trying my hardest to improve my writing skills, and essays just seem like a good way to do that. Even though sometimes (most of the time) essays are a real pain in my batooty. Please let me know what you thought of my personal narrative essay/autobiographical short story. This is a little corny, but aren't our first loves always that way? I was young and this was my own personal fairy tale, like I said I'm kinda corny. Haha. :) Thank you very much in advance. ^_^

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