This Offer Stands Forever

last night , i swallowed liquor and a lighter , and this morning i threw up fire

I don't really know if you guys like reading about completely fictional characters, but I'm kind of hoping that you do.
Tell me if i should change the way the point of view is written, or tell me if you kind of like that.

So this is about Summer and Martin.
It's pretty much biographical to Martin and I, but I felt kind of uncomfortable writing about me and him because me and him don't exist anymore.

The story goes,
Martin crushes Summer
Summer crushes Martin
and everything in between

Pretty much all of this comes from actual events.
Just read it, I'd like that a lot .