Status: This is part 2 of a 3 part series. Hoping to have it picked up and turned into a film.
The Link
the zoo: night
the zoo: night
Liela, Jermaine, Darius and Kyle are at the zoo
Liela, Jermaine, Darius and Kyle sneak into the zoo
The zoo is closed and empty.
liela
His name is Hopkins. Jonathon Hopkins. He's a fallen turned special mortal.
DARIUS
Working at a zoo?
JERMAINE
Not exactly a qualification for redemption is it?
LIELA
Caring for God's creation is only a matter of righteousness.
KYLE
So where do we find this guy?
LIELA
This way.
Liela, Jermaine, Dairus and Kyle walk.
Jermaine catches up to Liela.
JERMAINE
The zoo huh? So this can be counted as a date? Isn't that what these humans say?
Liela
(laughs)
It's far from a date Jermaine.
Liela spots J. Hopkins.
Liela waves to J. Hopkins
J. Hopkins waves back.
Inside the zoo: night- later
Kyle and Darius are looking at a polar bear floating in water
Jermaine and Liela are talking with J. Hopkins
JERMAINE
So a special mortal huh?
J.Hopkins
During my guardianship when I lost my guard.. I gave up my wings. I was ashamed. I wanted to prove myself worthy to God again. So I chose the life of a special mortal.
JERMAINE
So you tore off your own wings?
J.HOPKINS
yes.
LIELA
How does one become redeemed?
J.HOPKINS
It's not an easy task Liela. But there are two courses.
JERMAINE
What are they?
J.HOPKINS
The first one is self sacrifice, but you have to be a mortal in order to die. Once you die you are redeemed in heaven by God.
JERMAINE
ehh, let's skip that one. What's the second?
J.HOPKINS
Taking upon yourself guardianship of a human.
a lady in a zoo uniform walks by and smiles at J.Hopkins.
Jermaine notices and smiles.
JERMAINE
I get it.. the zoo. You chose a mortal who looks after God's creations.
J.HOPKINS
yes.. I did.
LIELA
How will you know that you are redeemed?
J.HOPKINS
Well.. if you are mortal and self -sacrifice.
Jermaine shakes his head no sarcastically.
J.Hopkins raises an eyebrow.
J.HOPKINS
You will know in heaven once God decrees you with your wings again.
Liela
and guardianship?
J.HOPKINS
That's usually a route for the fallen angels to take but their wings would change back to white and their pitch black eyes to that bright blue.
JERMAINE
How long would it take?
J.HOPKINS
you never know. It could take a lifetime.. an eternity, it all depends on your motive.
JERMAINE
Like you do for her?
J.HOPKINS
I'm curious to know. When did you lose your guard.. Jermaine was it?
JERMAINE
I didn't lose a -
LIELA
He's confused right now.
J. Hopkins looks at Jermaine strangely.
J.HOPKINS
Give it to me straight Liela..
JERMAINE
I'm a fallen pops.
J.Hopkins eyes widen.
J.HOPKINS
What's the meaning of this Liela!? Bringing a fallen angel here to my advisement! God's law is sanctioned we are-
LIELA
We are to have nothing to do with the fallen. I know. But this time it's different.. they have this special mortal you see-
J.HOPKINS
No! I will have no part of this..of this abomination!
J.Hopkins leaves angrily down the hall.
Liela yells "Wait" and chases after J. Hopkins
Jermaine Follows.
Darius and Kyle watch from afar.
KYLE
What was that about?
DARIUS
Our kind isn't welcome anywhere.. heaven, hell or even earth.
KYLE
I can see that.
DARIUS
We thought once we rebelled that we would be able to love in the way we wanted to.. to prove that God's love was something beyond laws and sanctions.
KYLE
is that what happened? How he tricked you?
DARIUS
Satan was very influential with his words. He spoke of things between he and God to which we never heard. He told half-truths that turned out to be lies.
KYLE
Then what happened?
DARIUS
We were cast out to hell. In hell it was constant war.. constant tests for strengths and titles. There was no end. The fallen broke up into two groups eventually when some of us wanted God back.
KYLE
The fallen and the redeemers.
Darius nods his head yes.
DARIUS
Some of us join missions to earth just so we could get away..
KYLE
Like you?
DARIUS
And Jermaine.. though he doesn't want to admit it for strength in pride.. he wants God back just as much as I do.
Kyle
Hey, I've been wondering.. what's God like.
Darius laughs
Darius is about to explain until he suddenly stops
Darius looks around
Darius becomes angered
Darius pushes Kyle out of the way
The ceiling breaks through
Darius is knocked to the ground
A 7'1 angel is standing between Darius and Kyle
his eyes are pitch black and his wings are black
DARIUS
..Julian! Run kyle! Alert the others! Run!
Julian turns to look at kyle
Kyle scampers on the floor
Kyle gets to his feet and runs in the opposite direction
Darius rises on his feet
Julian turns to face Darius
JULIAN
Permeus is mortal, I wouldn't have thought the rumor true. Are you?
Darius
yes Julian, I'm a redeemer. It doesn't have to be this way.. for anyone! We can find our way back home again we can ask God for his forgiveness!
JULIAN
I am home.
Julian raises his hand
A giant hammer on a staff appears in Julians hand.
Julian slams the ground towards Darius
The ground shakes and Darius jumps out of the way
Darius transforms into a fallen
DARIUS
Julian, please! We don't have to do this. Just trust what I say there is a way.
Julian walks towards Darius.
JULIAN
Rumors, that's all it is good for.
Julian and Darius begin fighting.
fight sequence ends with Julian grabbing Darius by the throat.
Wings can be heard coming in at an alarming rate.
Liela and Jermaine are flying towards Julian.
Jermaine tackles Julian and begins fighting.
Liela helps Darius
Liela joins the fight with Julian
J. Hopkins and Kyle come from the end of the hall.
Kyle and J. Hopkins watch the fight
Liela strikes the staff of Julian's hammer breaking it into a smaller wield.
Julian breaks Liela's sword with his hammer
Liela kicks the hammer out of Julians hands
Fight ends with Jermaine ripping off Julians wings.
Liela takes Julians hammer.
Julian is now mortal and feels fear for the first time.
DARIUS
It's called fear.. Julian.
JULIAN
I don't.. take it away! Give me back my wings!
LIELA
We can't stay here, others are sure to come.
J.HOPKINS
I'll take care of him, you guys get out of here.
outside the zoo: night - later
People have gathered on the opposite side of the zoo fence
They are staring at Liela, Darius, Jermaine and Kyle
JERMAINE
Who are all these people?
DARIUS
Kyle?
Kyle steps forward and looks
KYLE
They've all got red eyes..?
LIELA
Demons.
A shout comes out from the crowd
The people begin climbing and jumping over the fence
The 3 angels show their wings
LIELA
Protect Kyle Darius!
Liela and Jermaine go into battle
Darius fights those that get near Kyle
Liela Protects Jermaine from his wings being torn off
Jermaine returns the favor to Liela
fight scene ends when all demons are defeated
liela
We have to leave, now!
JERMAINE
Yeah, no kidding.
Liela, Jermaine, Darius and Kyle are at the zoo
Liela, Jermaine, Darius and Kyle sneak into the zoo
The zoo is closed and empty.
liela
His name is Hopkins. Jonathon Hopkins. He's a fallen turned special mortal.
DARIUS
Working at a zoo?
JERMAINE
Not exactly a qualification for redemption is it?
LIELA
Caring for God's creation is only a matter of righteousness.
KYLE
So where do we find this guy?
LIELA
This way.
Liela, Jermaine, Dairus and Kyle walk.
Jermaine catches up to Liela.
JERMAINE
The zoo huh? So this can be counted as a date? Isn't that what these humans say?
Liela
(laughs)
It's far from a date Jermaine.
Liela spots J. Hopkins.
Liela waves to J. Hopkins
J. Hopkins waves back.
Inside the zoo: night- later
Kyle and Darius are looking at a polar bear floating in water
Jermaine and Liela are talking with J. Hopkins
JERMAINE
So a special mortal huh?
J.Hopkins
During my guardianship when I lost my guard.. I gave up my wings. I was ashamed. I wanted to prove myself worthy to God again. So I chose the life of a special mortal.
JERMAINE
So you tore off your own wings?
J.HOPKINS
yes.
LIELA
How does one become redeemed?
J.HOPKINS
It's not an easy task Liela. But there are two courses.
JERMAINE
What are they?
J.HOPKINS
The first one is self sacrifice, but you have to be a mortal in order to die. Once you die you are redeemed in heaven by God.
JERMAINE
ehh, let's skip that one. What's the second?
J.HOPKINS
Taking upon yourself guardianship of a human.
a lady in a zoo uniform walks by and smiles at J.Hopkins.
Jermaine notices and smiles.
JERMAINE
I get it.. the zoo. You chose a mortal who looks after God's creations.
J.HOPKINS
yes.. I did.
LIELA
How will you know that you are redeemed?
J.HOPKINS
Well.. if you are mortal and self -sacrifice.
Jermaine shakes his head no sarcastically.
J.Hopkins raises an eyebrow.
J.HOPKINS
You will know in heaven once God decrees you with your wings again.
Liela
and guardianship?
J.HOPKINS
That's usually a route for the fallen angels to take but their wings would change back to white and their pitch black eyes to that bright blue.
JERMAINE
How long would it take?
J.HOPKINS
you never know. It could take a lifetime.. an eternity, it all depends on your motive.
JERMAINE
Like you do for her?
J.HOPKINS
I'm curious to know. When did you lose your guard.. Jermaine was it?
JERMAINE
I didn't lose a -
LIELA
He's confused right now.
J. Hopkins looks at Jermaine strangely.
J.HOPKINS
Give it to me straight Liela..
JERMAINE
I'm a fallen pops.
J.Hopkins eyes widen.
J.HOPKINS
What's the meaning of this Liela!? Bringing a fallen angel here to my advisement! God's law is sanctioned we are-
LIELA
We are to have nothing to do with the fallen. I know. But this time it's different.. they have this special mortal you see-
J.HOPKINS
No! I will have no part of this..of this abomination!
J.Hopkins leaves angrily down the hall.
Liela yells "Wait" and chases after J. Hopkins
Jermaine Follows.
Darius and Kyle watch from afar.
KYLE
What was that about?
DARIUS
Our kind isn't welcome anywhere.. heaven, hell or even earth.
KYLE
I can see that.
DARIUS
We thought once we rebelled that we would be able to love in the way we wanted to.. to prove that God's love was something beyond laws and sanctions.
KYLE
is that what happened? How he tricked you?
DARIUS
Satan was very influential with his words. He spoke of things between he and God to which we never heard. He told half-truths that turned out to be lies.
KYLE
Then what happened?
DARIUS
We were cast out to hell. In hell it was constant war.. constant tests for strengths and titles. There was no end. The fallen broke up into two groups eventually when some of us wanted God back.
KYLE
The fallen and the redeemers.
Darius nods his head yes.
DARIUS
Some of us join missions to earth just so we could get away..
KYLE
Like you?
DARIUS
And Jermaine.. though he doesn't want to admit it for strength in pride.. he wants God back just as much as I do.
Kyle
Hey, I've been wondering.. what's God like.
Darius laughs
Darius is about to explain until he suddenly stops
Darius looks around
Darius becomes angered
Darius pushes Kyle out of the way
The ceiling breaks through
Darius is knocked to the ground
A 7'1 angel is standing between Darius and Kyle
his eyes are pitch black and his wings are black
DARIUS
..Julian! Run kyle! Alert the others! Run!
Julian turns to look at kyle
Kyle scampers on the floor
Kyle gets to his feet and runs in the opposite direction
Darius rises on his feet
Julian turns to face Darius
JULIAN
Permeus is mortal, I wouldn't have thought the rumor true. Are you?
Darius
yes Julian, I'm a redeemer. It doesn't have to be this way.. for anyone! We can find our way back home again we can ask God for his forgiveness!
JULIAN
I am home.
Julian raises his hand
A giant hammer on a staff appears in Julians hand.
Julian slams the ground towards Darius
The ground shakes and Darius jumps out of the way
Darius transforms into a fallen
DARIUS
Julian, please! We don't have to do this. Just trust what I say there is a way.
Julian walks towards Darius.
JULIAN
Rumors, that's all it is good for.
Julian and Darius begin fighting.
fight sequence ends with Julian grabbing Darius by the throat.
Wings can be heard coming in at an alarming rate.
Liela and Jermaine are flying towards Julian.
Jermaine tackles Julian and begins fighting.
Liela helps Darius
Liela joins the fight with Julian
J. Hopkins and Kyle come from the end of the hall.
Kyle and J. Hopkins watch the fight
Liela strikes the staff of Julian's hammer breaking it into a smaller wield.
Julian breaks Liela's sword with his hammer
Liela kicks the hammer out of Julians hands
Fight ends with Jermaine ripping off Julians wings.
Liela takes Julians hammer.
Julian is now mortal and feels fear for the first time.
DARIUS
It's called fear.. Julian.
JULIAN
I don't.. take it away! Give me back my wings!
LIELA
We can't stay here, others are sure to come.
J.HOPKINS
I'll take care of him, you guys get out of here.
outside the zoo: night - later
People have gathered on the opposite side of the zoo fence
They are staring at Liela, Darius, Jermaine and Kyle
JERMAINE
Who are all these people?
DARIUS
Kyle?
Kyle steps forward and looks
KYLE
They've all got red eyes..?
LIELA
Demons.
A shout comes out from the crowd
The people begin climbing and jumping over the fence
The 3 angels show their wings
LIELA
Protect Kyle Darius!
Liela and Jermaine go into battle
Darius fights those that get near Kyle
Liela Protects Jermaine from his wings being torn off
Jermaine returns the favor to Liela
fight scene ends when all demons are defeated
liela
We have to leave, now!
JERMAINE
Yeah, no kidding.