Status: Please give me constructive criticism and help me finish this story!!! I would kindly appreciate any and all suggestions!!!

Unwravelling in your head...

Dealing with years of depression, self-harm, and suicidal attempts, Jamie, a girl from Phoenix, Arizona, meets a very special girl who tries to help her deal with her depression. Jamie lands herself in the hospital and things go haywire from there...
  1. First Chapter
    it is a work in progress