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Love Isn't Always Fair

chapter one

Andy Pov

I was lay on my bunk writing a new song about my love for Ashley or Juliet as I will tell people,he wouldn't think it about him.

verse one: one look and I'm sold
you've got me on my knees
you steal all my innocence
a love sick melody
take me

course: you always want the one that you can't have
cause love isn't always fair
you are the best romance I've never had
cause love isn't always fair

me: why can't you love me
Tears started to form of how he would never love me,

Ashley: who do you love

I bolted up and hit my head on the top of the bunk it hurt like hell...Damm this small buck

Ashley: careful Biersack

with a massive grin on his face

me: shut it Purdy
Ashley: you never answered the question

he looked hopeful like I was going to say him and I wanted to but he's straight

me: oh no one
Ashley: oh

he looked depressed and walked out but turned back

Ashley: the guys are going for food I'm staying here just so you know
me: okay

he walked out depressed as fuck witch is unusual for him I leaned back in my bunk and sighed

me: nice going Andy
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sorry if this rubbish my first story