Status: do you like it? things i can work on?

Where Is She?

where is she?

He slows down at first because he is having second thoughts like Did she see me? Would she like me? because if she did she would have stayed there gazing at me like i was at here maybe she would be playing with her hair i don't know! He keeps walking its lunch time. He sits with is few friends. And hes quiet which is a little unusual, his friends ask him whats wrong, he turns to one of his friends who was in class with him earlier if he seen that new girl? his friend said what new girl?
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what should i do??? any ideas? ANy fixes?