Status: this is the first chapter of my fanfic and i thnk it came out okay but tell me what you think

Green Day and Blink 182

Hi guys this is my first fanfic hope you like it.
This story is about the two bands Green Day and Blink 182, the P.O.V starts with blink 182 when Tom has a accident and ends up in hospital then eventually both bands come down with injuries and it all starts on Friday the 13th
  1. the accident
    we start of with blink 182 and there is a bit of a problem
  2. the accident (green days P.O.V)
    if you have read the last chapter you will know what happened to tom at exactly the same time almost in synce green day are having some problems
  3. saturday 14th
    it tis the day after both lead singers tom delonge and billie-joe armstrong ended up in hospital with non-fatal injuries for the night in htis chapter we are back to the point-of-view of blink 182
  4. wrong place wrong time
    so by now you can see that something very stranppening to both green day and bink 182, they have both recieved a strange drawing of themselves from a girl called kathryn or katt lets see what happens next