The Light Behind Your Eyes

The Light Behind Your Eyes - Chapter 2

I walked beside my friend, making sure not to be recognised.
If any fans saw us, then we would be completely and utterly screwed.
We walked for a little while, before it was getting late.
I turned around.

A few minutes later, i felt something force me to the ground, making me slam my face into the stone cold concrete.
I felt something freezing push into the back of my neck.

I saw Frank looking terirified, but he was nowhere near as scared as i was.
"You'd better give me every single penny you have!" Someone said behind me.
They dug the object further into my neck.

Then, i heard the familiar sound of someone cocking a gun.
I gasped.
Tears welled up in my eyes, and cold sweat began to run down my arms.
The pressure was digging into my neck, and i knew, almost instantly, that i was done for.

"I don't have any!" I said, truthfully.
"Well then, your gonna die, aren't you?!" He shouted.
By now, there was a crowd gathering, and police tape was around us.
The other three of my friends had come, and were almost crying.

Mikey bit his lip, nervously.
Tears poured out of my eyes, and onto the ground, forming a small puddle.
But i didn't care.
At this point, nothing else seemed relevant.

The mugger moved the gun down to my shoulder though godknows why and started pulling the trigger.
I closed my eyes, before a large bolt of pain shot through my shoulder, and a loud noise rung through the air.
I watched as the red liquid drained onto the ground, surrounding me.
I saw my friends shouting my name, and my brother with tears running down his face.
I heard footsteps running away, probaly the mugger, and before i knew it, everything disappeared, being replaced by utter darkness.
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Gee's been shot!
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