Darling, You Astound Me

It honestly worries me to be posting any of my stories again, but I feel like doing this for reasons I can't explain. I've been trying to better my writing, so maybe this is a test to see if I've actually made progress? This is a bitty piece taken from one of my Seth MacFarlane stories. Whether I'll post the rest of it on here or not, I'm not sure. Maybe I should finish it first before I decide. This is set in the summer of 1994, when Seth and his pregnant girlfriend are students at RISD. Feedback/Constructive criticism is highly appreciated and desperately wanted. <3