Status: first 5 chapters. still working on it. would love feedback

Forever After in Pakistan

A true story based on a girl's dream of a Happily Ever After, which takes on a new direction. How the recession puts pressure on families, compromising the hopes and dreams. This family had no other options but to try and rebuild the fairy tale ending piece by piece. Having nothing but their clothes and the love between them. How do they overcome the challenges of living in Pakistan?
  1. Forever After in Pakistan
    A true story based on a girl's dream of a Happily Ever After, which takes on a new direction. How the recession puts pressure on families, compromising the hopes and dreams. This family had no other options but to try and rebuild the fairy tale en