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Old Thorns

In the middle of a bloody war, a woman who's home city has come under occupation from their rival nation, Wyndlok, and is desperate to keep a secret hidden. With her city now under the thumb of a new Lord who cares little for the people of Nychenria she is wary of of seeing anyone from her past. Under the law of the new rulers, magic is heresy, and is an illegal practice. Giana has not told anyone about her own recently discovered gift. A gift that she, and the now hiding Oracles share. She fears that soon one of the Oracles will learn of her own gift, or worse a soldier learning of her ability.