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The Black Rose Society

wake up please

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"Wake up Skyler"
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"Please wake up."
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"Skyler please!"
. . .
I opened my eyes.
I saw Kate.
Those dark brown eyes stared into mine and saw straight through me, every action, every thought, every memory.
She had it all.
I slowly raised my arm and let my rough fingers touch her face.
If I saw her, I would be dead.
But her skin touched mine, she definitely was real.
"Skyler," she said in a tone that caused me to flinch.
She was Kate.
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