Injecting Music Into Your Veins

Raven has never known anything other than pain. Abused, and eventually raped by her uncle, after the death of her parents, there was only one thing that could save her: Music. But, the pain was getting worse, and the music was fading.
Then, she meets Gerard. No--She sees Gerard. Someone that could save her. She finally found someone who could give her the lyrics that could numb the pain. But there was more pain hidden in those words, that she could ever know.

But she would soon find out.

Victims
Raven - 17
Gerard - 18
Frankie - 17
Ray - 18
Bob - 18
Mikey - 17
Danny - 16
Alex - 28

Please, please PLEASE comment, and give me your thoughts. Bare with me on the first few chapters, because of introductions and such... It gets good, I promise.