When I Watch You

This story was originally on INO as Metal to Head-Must be Love. However, I kind of just stopped it on there, after a while. I went back and reread it recently, and realized it's not as bad as I previously thought. I'm posting it here, as a oneshot.

The first few chapters summarize better than what I would type here.

Every color represents a point of view of ONE person. Each person continues with that color throughout.