December Every Day

So, I've seen several stories that take place in DU, and I decided to try writing one. I've had fun with it, but I feel like it's starting to get worse. So tell me about that, and just anything else you think I should add or whatever.
I think I know where the plot is going, but it's the getting there that's getting worse, I think.
  1. An Introduction
  2. Identification
    Short chapter. I tend to do too many of this kind of thing.
  3. New Meetings
  4. Train Closer Up
  5. We're Here
  6. Surroundings
  7. He's Back
  8. Inside
    Another short one.
  9. View Two
  10. Response
    Really really short.
  11. More Dragging Occurs
  12. Before Lunch
    I'm back. And I'm going to keep updating.