Early Sunsets Over Monroeville

[Oneshot]

This story is influenced by My Chemical Romance's first album I Brought You My Bullets, You Brought Me Your Love.

A young girl and her lover run from their worst nightmare. Something they thought only happened in horror stories...

Please, if you read this story, leave some kind of comment.
I would really appreciate some reviews, good or bad.
All constructive critisism is welcome.