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Im taking back the life you stole

You told me this get's harder,
Well it did,
Been holding on forever.
Promise me that when I'm gone,
You'll kill my enimes.
The damage you've inflicted,
Temporary wounds.
Im coming back from the dead,
Well ill take you home with me,
Im taking back the life you stole.

Marcie, a 14 year old girl, is forced by her parents to move to New Jersey. Away from her home in London, England.
She desperately doesn't want to leave England for New Jersey.
But what happens when she meets 5 guys who turn her world upside down?

Will it all end in trouble and terror?
Or will there finally be light at the end of the tunnel for Marcie...

[The first ever story ive written. please be nice]
Please comment otherwise i wont update
sorry if thats harsh but i need to know if people are actually enjoying it.
thanks.
  1. It's not the life it seems
    You get what everyone else gets honey.
  2. You'll never take me alive. trust me.
  3. Then i say to you we can take to the highway
    "Now THAT was out of order."
  4. Welcome to New Jersey
    Marice finally arrvies in New Jersey
  5. Only time will tell...
    The first part has been written but in frank's POV then a little in Marcie's.
  6. The guys?!
    Marcie opens up to frank a bit. alot more he doesn't know yet. also she meets the other guys.
  7. Giggles and skittles
    "This is halloween everybody make a scene"
  8. this is not an update.
    sorry.
  9. We met in the emergency room
    69 EH? Frankie's dirty thoughts get him confused.