Courage to Continue

This is a MCR fanfic, in particular...Gerard Way. It's the first fanfic that I’ve ever written and my second story. The main characters are Minty, Gerard, Mikey, Frank, Ray, Bob, Emily, Zoe and Jarred. I know that the characters ages are all screwed up in my story and I have no idea what actually happened to MCR in high school. So, sorry in advance for that. Enjoy!
BTW: This will not be a happy story all of the time in fact, it will get quite evil...

And it starts off pretty crappy...but please bare with me. It does get better! I promise!
If you don't like it, can you tell me what you don't like about it? That would be lots of help!