The Puppet Girl

The following chapters, are chosen extracts from something considerably larger that I am working on, the extracts, in no way, reveal the storyline.

Each chapter will be released with two version, the first version will be something of a recount of the given nightmare, and the second will be told as if the narrator is present.
The two versions will be separated by a series of underscores, and will be titled appropriately.

Tell me what you think of each version and which one I should use.