My Taking Back Valentine System of Fall out Romance

So i have been reading mibba for ages but am not game enough to write my own stories

but i was home sick today and wrote this my first Mibba story
It's about me and my friends and its basically a story made up to include as many band names as possible

if you read please comment good or bad i dont mind advice and criticism are both welcome!!!

its going to be a oneshot unless people want more.