The Night I Shouldn't Have Gone Out

Hey guys, I hope you liked this story. It's finally over, I know.
I just posted the sequel yesterday, so please go and read it. Leave comments to.
I need to know your oppinions to make me a better writer and also to hear what you think.
Hope you enjoy as much as you did this story.

Also the sequel, I finally decided on a name, is:
Murders and Temptations Just Bring Us All Closer

Hope you enjoy it.

-Brittani
Aka,
black.silent.tears.