Thnks Fr Th Mmrs

Its weird. I can't write a story like I write 'Widow or Divorcee?'. It's really weird.
Here's my lame attempt at another hard hitter.
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Ryan is moving.. again.
His mother doesn't have enough money to stay in Vegas.
Brendon still hadn't admitted his feelings.
Now all they have left is a long distance friendship.
And Brendon's broken heart.
Until.. they meet again.
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Comments appreciated.