Promises Under the Rain
This was originally written for a contest but, well, shit happens, so in the end it wasn't entered. The 3 things I picked were: characters Linda and Zacky Vengeance, and a theme of Weakness.
New contest - entered in victim;'s contest (Second Place!), as well as this contest.
I want to share this story with whoever is willing to read and hopefully gain some constructive criticism. It's written differently to how I usually write, so some feedback on the style of writing would be great. Also, hopefully it teaches you something. I really hope you manage to take something away from my writing.
Hope you enjoy reading. Even if you don't, comment with why. I'd really appreciate it.
New contest - entered in victim;'s contest (Second Place!), as well as this contest.
I want to share this story with whoever is willing to read and hopefully gain some constructive criticism. It's written differently to how I usually write, so some feedback on the style of writing would be great. Also, hopefully it teaches you something. I really hope you manage to take something away from my writing.
Hope you enjoy reading. Even if you don't, comment with why. I'd really appreciate it.