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Whirlwind

I guess I got lost when I went to go hang out in the woods, so I started to worry as it got darker. I was probably in the middle of the woods when I started to hear strange noises. I shivered despite my coat, and then I started hearing voices. They were coming closer, and scaring me at that. I started running, ignoring any scrapes and scratches. They voices still got closer, and soon I couldn't outrun them. I ducked into a tree, hoping they couldn't find me. After a little while, I heard the voices.