Syn Of Love

OK I FINALLY GOT CHAPTER 4 DONE!!!!!!!!!!

By the way, I'm not sure if it is all good so one copy will be sent to scenequeen. by inbox messaging and the other will be posted here (:

Syn of Love Chapter 4 [untitled chapter-what do you guys think for a title?]
"So you took a mean dive down the trail of death, huh?" Brian asked the blond that sat neatly with her legs crossed. She was sweet, had her hair nicely done as the other girls did, but there was something about her that he preferred over the others.

She smiles nicely and takes another sip of red wine, giggling as he did, nodding when he said something. It all seemed...fake.

He walked her to the separate table, picking another one off and escorting her to the table of two they would sit at. It was open, the night was young, and he selected the group of blond-haired women to take to dinner tonight. He dressed somewhat nicely. A dark blazer, ripped jeans, shiny shoes, it was casual nice. What he really needed was a cigarette.

He decides to skip the opening of the dinner he was going to share with the next blond. He excused himself early after seating her and pulled out a pack of Marlboro Red and popped one in his mouth like a lollipop. He really was trying to cut back.

"Can't handle it, can you?" A voice asks him. It was one of the blond contestants who never had her chance yet and she was puffing out smoke. She had a different air. Then again, so did most of the others. Was she something that he could connect with?

The bathroom door to the men's was shut and she was slammed against it, his body slowly following hers, their breath rate increasing. He hiked the skirt of her dress up her leg, ultimately slipping his fingers in the straps of her thong and yanking it down. She holds his cheeks as her tongue travels in his mouth. He slips a rubber condom on over his length and she divides her legs, cocking her head back to arch her back.

Thrusting into her, getting her to moan, to cough up sex, it was too easy. He finished the orgasm and it was exactly the way he thought it would be: from a slut. She giggles, thinking she immediately won him over.

His hair was slightly tossed and he held her hand all the way to the door. The blond he was supposed to be dining with looked worried and received a winning look from the girl he held hands with. When they got to the door, his smile was still present.

"When you get to the mansion by the cab I called" He continues to smile, earning one from her. "Pack your things and get off the damn show"

Her mouth was agape and he shook his head.

"Leave it open for another rich rockstar to insert his cock there" He says crudely. He takes off his blazer and walks with it to the two seated table. He places the blazer on the back of his chair.

"I'm sorry, let's start over. I'm Synyster Gates, what's your name?" The sweet smile didn't disappear and neither did his tolerance for the perfect girl.

MAJOR LOLS.
I can picture that so well!

Chapter tis posted (:

I loved it!
Should the next chapter just be elimination then?
We can then start on challenges. :cute:

Sure (: and thanks! *feels accomplished* but sorry for the late update!

Yuhs. Elimination. :)
Ooo guys, at the start of May I may be absent for a while.
My GCSE's start then & yeah, I need to do well.

Okie dokie then! Good luck!!!!!! (:

For the elimination, Brian just gives the girls the rings and sends a few girls home, but anything else?

Before elimination though, isn't Brian going to get to know all of the girls though? I think it would be good if each girl had a chapter to their own for the dates, so it makes the story more longer and see what cooky and hilarious chapters we could get? Plus it gives him a chance to know them one on one, what there personalities are like, etc. And after that, he can eliminate a third of the girls?

Also, (from what i discussed with Raine) with that girl that got booted off of the show and we don't know who it was. Why don't we put her down as an intruder who broke in because she didn't make it on the show?

Wow guys, sorry that I've been M.I.A., I've been caught up with school. =[

haha wow. when i was on constantly for some brainstorming nobody was on, im off for a couple days and wham! haha. i'll check out the update later, but im sure its amazing!
i'll come on when i can come up for some more air from my pool of homework. =]

Anybody want to write about the date?
Or should we just move on with elimination?

i propose the elimination.
how about everybody else?

Yup, I agree.

Whatever suits everyone else =]

Okay. I'll get started on the next chapter right away.
What should the first challenge be? That way somebody could start working on that or something. :shifty

Umm..
*looks back on our discussions*
I'm not too sure on that one..
What does everyone else think we should use?
It's gotta be something that really splits the group..

Maybe start off with the trivia about Brian and the band?
The girls can get mad at each other because some won't know anything.
Just an idea. :cute:

Yes!
I like it. :)
They can get asked questions that are really hard to find out.. So if someone knows the answer then Brian can wierded out and think they're a stalker or something. (?)