Syn Of Love

:O Yes. I love the evilness.
I like the outfit choosing one, we could get really creative with that. Like a girl who pretends to know all about him, when really she just thinks he is a fine piece of ass, chooses a real dodgy outfit, showing Bri that he should eliminate her..

i like the promise ring idea with giving them out then taking them back, kind of like shot at love.

dude, the girls should get nicknames like on flavor flav's show.
(:
so no one really knows?

That's a good idea! Blah, I'm not good with nickname's though, so somebody else would have to think of some.
Oh, and I was just starting to write the first chapter and I realized that we don't have a house for them!
So if anybody has a house in mind, send me the pic so I can add it in!

I have an important announcement! My parents are getting an official divorce so I won't be able to come on Mibba as often. But I'd still like to continue to stay as a character/writer. So if it's OK with you, could I leave my email here so if anything new comes along, I could or you guys could email it...the emails go straight to my phone bytheway...so here it is: duckeegowhee@aol.com

I like the nickname idea! I'd love to help pick out nicknames(:

Buckle up Baby:

I have an important announcement! My parents are getting an official divorce so I won't be able to come on Mibba as often. But I'd still like to continue to stay as a character/writer. So if it's OK with you, could I leave my email here so if anything new comes along, I could or you guys could email it...the emails go straight to my phone bytheway...so here it is: duckeegowhee@aol.com

I like the nickname idea! I'd love to help pick out nicknames(:

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Yes, that will be fine! I will be sure to let you know all that is discussed. Thank you for letting us know!

im sorry Buckle Up Baby! =[

Thanks you guys. After today, I might not come on that often. But I did check the first chapter. Love it much?

You know for the mattress idea? I VOLUNTEER TO BE THE VICTIM! OK here's what I have in response to the mattress idea:

The idea was extremely devious. Shane was definite competition. So being [unfortunately] a heavy sleeper, the girls snuck her onto a blow up mattress and sailed her into the pool. It was genius, the girls were positive that Syn would see her and eliminate her on the spot. Knowing that their plan was going to work, they snicker and go back to their beds.

The next morning...

Shane wakes up to the smell of nature, instead of hairspray. The sounds of birds chit chat, instead of her roommates gossiping. The surrounding of chloronated water, instead of bras and other articles of clothing scattered on the floor. Hell, floor was six feet under Shane and the only objects stopping her from touching it is her six inch thick mattress and the pool water.

Shouts of "Syn!" could be heard inside the house. Shane learned instantly of what her roommates did. They set her up. But she remained calm. Somebody obviously didn't want her around, so why help them?

She stripped to her bra and underwear as if they were a bikini set. Syn soon appears at the deck with shocked looking girls at his side.

"Hey guys!" Shane calls, sitting on the mattress with both legs stretched as if she was going horse riding.

"Shane..." Syn starts. "What are you doing there?"

"Oh, Gates, didn't you know that this is the new fad?" She asks, silenting adding, "Sail your roommate off in the pool on a blow up mattress in the dead of night and hope she gets kicked off when found in the morning"

"The new fad?" He asks.

"Yeah..." She giggles. "A new..." She thinks before randomly selecting an excuse. "Party starter"

She slightly bounces her shoulders for exaggeration but after, she could mentally stab herself. Even she wouldn't buy into that excuse.

"Really?" He asks, unconvinced. The bright smile on her face and the confused shrugs of the girls answered everything.

"Sounds like fun" Before they could register, Syn runs and jumps into the water. Shane giggles as the water splashes her and she motions for the other girls to join them. When Syn surfaces, she has the "Holier-than-thou" position on the mattress. He swims over to her and he holds her legs with a grin.

"Gates, don't even think about it..." She warns and he mouths "what?" with an evil smrk, playing innocent.

"Syn!" She yells as her ship capsizes, falling into his arms in the water. A cold rush enters and they both surface, Syn helping her. She chants "Cold, cold, cold", shivering.

"You can't swim, can you?" He chuckles.

"I'm no Michael Phelps..." She breathes. "I'm sorry I practiced CPR before doggie paddle"

"Mind teaching me some of that?" His lips connect with hers and her hands cup his cheek. When they pull away, a Berry brother calls his name. He honorably leads her to the shallow where she can stand and leaves her in thought.

She felt a spark. Did he?

OK so I learned that in The Bachelor that the guy (in this case Syn) can kiss the girl and it would be OK. So this is my idea from the mattress idea, so it's up to you guys (: I'm fine if you include it or not. Heck, I'm happy if you include it (: What do you think?

i thought that it was great!
laughed so hard!
XD

updates are great so far!
love it!
=]

pretty funny too.

Thanks :cute:
And I agree, that Buckle up Baby's idea is brilliant!
And who is going to be doing the next chapter?
I'm going to go put together some info about the girls, so it will be easier to write about them and think of nicknames for them.

:)
Age order?

It doesn't matter who does which chapter unless someone really wants to. Basically, whoever has the cool idea for the chapter. Oh and after every "episode", we should have a little game with the readers, right?

Thanks or agreeing. Bytheway, that can be somewhere in the beginning/middle is way before we get to us... (:

Tell us when you've got the info so we can make the nicknames as quick as possible(:

Here is the info for the girls.

Sasha - She likes to write, and she watches NASCAR frequently. She is very bubbly, but not in a fangirl type of way.

Brooke - Real energetic and crazy. But kind of quiet. Loves Avenged Sevenfold. Likes all kinds of music. Doesn't really like being mean to people. Likes to be different. Sometimes Loud when she gets use to the people around her.

Vera-Rhea - She's generally a fun person to be around, and loves making all kinds of pervy jokes, even if she does go a little overboard sometimes. She loves to laugh and make a fool of herself. Of course, this doesn't always turn out well -- sometimes she seriously makes an ass of herself and it's just not funny. Tough luck. She finds pleasure in the little things in life, more so than the big picture. A small compliment, even backhanded makes her happy. She doesn't think she can dance but loves dancey music. She loves an adrenaline rush, so fast cars and roller coasters are a huge love for her. She's bubbly when she gets hyper, she's a flirty drunk, and she's pretty friendly in general. She doesn't like it when people dislike her or when her friends are upset, because then they act all sour towards her. She tends to have a temper at times, a short one at that, and it's probably in everyone's best interest to not fuck with her. She does tend to go through bouts of bad moods now and again, and she's very sensitive to what other people think of her even if she doesn't show it. She went to school to major in computer graphics and minor in psychology. She's a graphic designer for a small company now, works two days a week from home and three at her job.

Kaitlin - She loves to read and write, and loves music. She hates judging people, She's very shy around people she doesn't know very well, but is extremely open around those she does know. She's very opinionated and knows how to have a good time.

Alexis - Very outgoing, down-to-earth and usually is the one who tries to keep peace between everyone, but if you mess with her friends and family than there's no calming her down until she's done taking her anger out on the person who started the fight.

Tsugumi - Works as a librarian and is a very playful person. She enjoys playing pranks on people and doing childish things. Which can sometimes be her downfall.

Kelsey - Kelsey is very goofy and likes to goof off usually. Can be very serious at times if someone is trying to be serious and talk to her about something that is serious. A very nice person to everyone, but can be bitchy at times if someone is messing with her friends or someone she cares about.

Emily - Shes a 24 year old Photographer. Lives in Austin, TX. She is sweet and kind, but gets mad easily. A party animal, but knows when to stop. Music is a big part in her life. Criag Mabbitt's sister

Reese - Very passionate about music and plays guitar, doesn't want a career in the music business because she couldn't handle the lifestyle. She is a very happy go lucky person, but can be a bitch when you get on the wrong side of her. When things go wrong, she cries, she cries until there are no more tears left, it is something she can't control/stop. Peaceful walks along the beach with a loved one or loved ones, or just plain hanging out on the beach with them, are her downfall, she can't resist them. She loves animals, especially her White Shiba Inu called Starr. Her favourite foods are Strawberries, Cheetos and Spaghetti, she doesn't like Shellfish, Marshmallows or Boiled Eggs.

Cameryn - A bit shy, but can be really outgoing at times. She usually listens to punk rock, but she'll occasionally listen to boy bands that most people consider sell-outs. She writes songs, but has never let anyone hear them thinking that it's horrible.

Shane - art school; teaches dance; bubbly, funny, happy-go-lucky

Danielle - A model/bartender that works at a bar called Taboo. She dabbles in some writing as well and tends to keep her writings secret. Can be pretty mellow and quiet but if you piss her off be prepared to be a little personal with the ground. She loves the color purple and is also a huge advocate for domestic violence.

Nicole - Hard-headed and strong willed. Sarcastic and smartassed. Has an open mind to most things. Holds a grudge well. Is determined when she puts her mind to something. Loves to have a good drink and a smoke with her friends in her spare time. Tends to be a bit meaner to some people, which gained her the nickname 'Nikki Vicious'. Web/Graphic Designer, Photographer

Demelza - Shy when she doesn't know people, but completely hyper if given any form of sugar. Becomes rather outspoken as she gets to know people, sarcastic and cynical. Works at a day care centre and is a figure skater.

Kareen - Shes funny and caring with a passion for cooking. She loves to read, shes smart and sarcastic but not in a mean way

Asher - Lives in DC, but is from Britain. Is working on a writing degree at Trinity, and is about halfway through. Works at Starbucks

Naomi - Is twenty two old and goes to college part time. She wants to be a physiologist slash author. She loves the way the human mind works and is intrigued by the oddest things. She can be pretty sarcastic at times but seems to be always trying to make others feel better. She loves music and "scream" is her favorite song.She gets tongue tied, alot.She loves to let loose and have fun. She's a flirty person but when she does start to care for someone she'll always give her all in the relationship. She likes to drink and hates drugs.Adores movies,reading,dancing,&&laughing.

Aria - She is waitress at a family restaurant and is working her way through college, studying to become a math teacher. She's a quiet person, kinda shy when you first meet her. But once she feels she can trust you she opens up rather quickly. She likes things that are sugary and bubbly. She likes juice and seltzer and doesn't drink anything alcoholic, at least not often. She's a bit random and is easily confused. Mainly all of this is just because I say so, so it may or may not fit. She has sarcastic and bitchy tendencies if you get on her bad side though.

Zara - She's 24 and she's a tattoo artist. She's a bit of a rebel child, doesn't take shit off anyone and she's kind of psychotic. She reads constantly, drinks, but doesn't smoke. She absolutely loves music. Her apartment is jam packed with cds and books. She changes her hairstyle constantly.

Nikki - Give her some sugar and she'll go insanely hyper. likes to smoke, and drink. Very nice, very stupid, very hard to keep track of. loves starting fights, hate cops!

Lysi - Shes funny, outragous, loves to have a good time with her friends, and could always sit down with a good book. She also wears thick black rimmed reading glasses occasionally. Music is her life but at the time she is a nurse. She is an aspiring guitarist.

Kate - Artsy person and likes vintage clothes. She's a bit shy and distances herself from the other girls, is the underdog of the competion basicly

Harlow - Is a tattoo artist with her own parlor in Los Angeles, California. She has a temper of sorts, and tends to be more on the sarcastic side, even with her humor, though that’s just how she’s always been. She does have a kind heart, though, as hard as it may be to believe.

Katie - Well, she's a bit shy when first introduced but warms up rather quickly. She loves being with the people that she calls friends and family and doesn't like to fight, but if she has too, she'll kick some ass. She's very defensive over loved ones and likes to read, write, and sometimes cook. Avenged Sevenfold is her favorite band and purple is her favorite color.

Angel - Pretty shy around people she doesn't know, but is pretty outgoing when you get to know her. Has a good sense of humor. Is smart, sweet, and caring.

October - She has two snake bites, and has her ears gaged. She is the only and younger sister of front man, Jacoby Shaddix. She loves to party, and have fun. She's up for anything. She sort of has a fear of the dark, and hates to be alone. She's carefree, and loves to laugh. She can be serious at times. It is hard for her to love, but when she does, it's fantastic! She is a tomboy, but nows how to be a lady at the same time. She can be very perverted, but everyone loves her for it.

As you can see, some of the people gave quite a bit of information for us to use. I hope that helps!

Wow.
We have a lot of nicknames to come up with..

We could ask the readers if they want to make up their own names.

But I'll get right on it! Who knew so many can be bubbly?

sasha's could be speedy, brook could be energizer (as in the energizer bunny), nicole could be vicious, nikki could be lost...thats all i have so far...and we dont have to use any of them if you all dont want but i like october and harlow so i think we should keep them, they are already unique names.

if we are updating by age, who's how old?
im 16 my birthday is in november.

I thought the nicknames were going to be like "nikki" to "nicole" or "sam" to "samantha" or some sort of funky name. I don't know. And scene queen. can decide who goes next...

What's the idea for the next chapter anyway?

Blah, it would be kind of hard to think of nicknames for all of the girls, eh? Should we just let them keep their names?

And the next chapter is most likely the big date with Syn. He will spend some time with the girls to see which ones he would like to keep or eliminate later that night.

Then the chapter after that one would be the elimination. Syn will give the girls he keeps the promise rings.

That's just what I was thinking, but if somebody has anything better. Feel free to let us know!

okay, so im still a little confuzed about the elimination.
i guess i see now my own problem. :\
are there going to be fake girls in the beginning that he eliminates and then the eal characters applied will still get a chance?
and, the authors here are characters in the story, yes?
so are we going to be writing in our pov from the characters or just writting like narators?