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| wyliecoyotesfriend Member Age: 14 Gender: Female Points: 100 | ^Sure :P |
| Skiffle. Member Age: 12 Gender: Female Points: 100 | Quizilla is annoying. Used to be good, not anymore. Sorry for not posting much, my internet isn't even worth trying to use anymore. Just posting this to let you guys know I'm still alive. |
| wyliecoyotesfriend Member Age: 14 Gender: Female Points: 100 | ^Good to know :XD I'll work on the next chapter either today or tomorrow... |
| Hot Diggety Member Age: 18 Gender: Female Points: 100 | WE have THREE comments, on the megcabot board. Here's the linky. (prays it works) Linky http://forums.megcabot.com/index.php?showtopic=55100 - In case it doesn't work just copy and paste the address into the address bar at the top of the page. |
| wyliecoyotesfriend Member Age: 14 Gender: Female Points: 100 | That's effin awesome! ![]() |
| wyliecoyotesfriend Member Age: 14 Gender: Female Points: 100 | Oh great, now I stalk the megcabot page :XD |
| Hot Diggety Member Age: 18 Gender: Female Points: 100 | me too. Uploaded the third chapter there. Already got some responses. |
| wyliecoyotesfriend Member Age: 14 Gender: Female Points: 100 | Finally! I remembered to do chapter 6 :tehe: ******** Victoria's POV I try to think about rainbows When it gets bad You've got to think about something To keep from going mad- I try to think about big, fat roses When the ship starts going down But my head is wicked jealous; Don't wanna talk about it right now. These past couple of days having extremely vexing for me. As I'm driving down the morning commute, I feel an urgency to rip out my radio and toss it across the highway. What has caused me to act so aggravated? Some that know me well might say that it's because Cole and Claire- the obnoxious double Cs- have hooked up. But that is not the case. A new chica has moved up to our section. She’s a little timid, not very ugly but not pretty either, and a diligent, organized worker with a steady head; a little like myself. We should be best buds, right? Absolutely wrong! It seems that Cole has taken an interest in her. He's jumped from Claire to this new meat as if he were an STD. Her name is Haylie. Haylie has officially become my personal Hell. She's definitely not mean-hearted; she's fairly bashful and polite. What had troubled me about her is that she had done in three minutes something I would never have dared to hope to accomplish in three years. And so the past two days have put me in a very, very dark mood. There's just something about you that gets me in a twist. And sometimes I think that cupid is just taking a piss... And now No Doubt is taunting me about the epic failure of my personal life through lyrics I'm usually fond of. Every song in my mix tape that plays in my car seems to link to me and Cole, so all of the songs I love are currently annoying the hell of me. I flip to the next song. It's funny how I find myself in love with you; if I could buy my reasoning, I'd pay to loose... GAH! And I rip the cd out, consequently having to listen to mainstream crap for the rest of the drive. By the time I had reached work, my head was buzzing with even more breakup songs like 'Hot and Cold' and 'Teardrops on My Guitar'; I was practically blubbering. What a great way to start 30, hmm? Please note the venomous sarcasm in my voice. I ride the elevator to the eighth floor where our section's cubicle's were at, a Dunkin' Doughnuts coffee cup in my hand, and the advertisements I worked on the night before on the newest John Frieda and Cover Girl products that Boss wanted me to do, both tucked under my arm in a manila folder. Haylie's already there, typing away busily on her first assignment, whatever that may be; apparently she comes as early as I do. Oh, did I mention? Her cubicle is right next to mine. Bloody hell. Curtly, I sit down in my rolly chair and turn the CPU on; playing FreeCell once it was up. I had been given no further assignment, so I was left to fiddle with my hands and watch the time crawl by. Jeez, Cole was right. I had no life. After some time, Haylie eased back in her chair for a break, rolling her shoulders and her wrists to prevent arthritis. She looks over at me hesitantly. "So... the living barbie's a pain in the arse, huh?" Haylie asked in her attempt to break the ice. I offer her an aloof raised eyebrow, suggesting that I was annoyed, but inside, really, I was grinning bemusedly. No truer words had been spoken. "Come on, you know it. You just wanna jab a pencil into one of her boobs and watch the water-bag in her bra leak." I slip a giggle. Okay, I admit, that was flippin' hilarious. She smiled, and I extinguish the lightness in my mood right away, remembering that she was on my hit-list, along with 'the barbie' herself and her troupe of clueless bimbos. Cole- I mean, that guy- climbed up the stairs. "Hey, Cole!" Haylie called, and my sour mood returned. "Hey, Hayes. Victoria," Cole greeted. I pointedly ignore him and busy myself with the manila folder. "Okay, weird," he muttered to himself and stalked off. Cole's POV 'Bitch' was radiating from her so brilliantly, that Claire would have been proud. Speak of the devil; there she came stumbling up the stairs. "Cole..." she mumbled once she reached me, leaning on one of my shoulders for support “… H-how are you, darling?” she drawled. Mascara was smeared around one eye and there was no eyeliner on the other eye. I could smell alcohol on her breath. "Claire," I hissed, "What the hell? Are you drunk?" It was a rhetorical question, but she lurched to one side and giggled, "Of course not, silly. Intoxication is unbecoming of a proper lady." That explained it. I stopped her from falling over to one side. "Excuse us," I said quickly as I led her to the bathrooms to wash the makeup she had applied messily. Haylie looked alarmed. Victoria looked amused. I sighed as we turned to leave, Claire occasionally tripping over her lethal, tall heels and looking absolutely muddled. God, these trickeries took way too much work. ************** Songs for this chapter include 'In My Head' and 'It's My Life', both by the awesome band No Doubt, which has joined back together! C/C? EDIT: Did ya notice that I used 'arse' instead of 'ass' :tehe: |
| Hot Diggety Member Age: 18 Gender: Female Points: 100 | I loved it. My chapter next, yes? And no I didn't notice it :( But I went back to search for it, and laughed for about 30 seconds. I take it Haylie's british? Awesome chapter. |
| wyliecoyotesfriend Member Age: 14 Gender: Female Points: 100 | I dunno :tehe: I just felt like putting it there xP Yup; next chapter =] |
| Hot Diggety Member Age: 18 Gender: Female Points: 100 | On it. Is Lucy still alive? |
| wyliecoyotesfriend Member Age: 14 Gender: Female Points: 100 | I dunno. Maybe the cavemen took her instead :tehe: She is prettier xP EDIT: Should I post the chapter yet? I want Lucie's O.K. before I do... |
| Skiffle. Member Age: 12 Gender: Female Points: 100 | Sorry, I keep forgetting about this (that sounds terrible). Sure, go ahead and post it. I adored the "poke a hole in her boobs" thing haha. Anything specific needed in my next chapter so I can put it in whilst I'm homework free? I've added the forum on my favourite list so I won't...die as much. Sorry again >.< . |
| Skiffle. Member Age: 12 Gender: Female Points: 100 | Waaaiiiit can you not post it yet? I'm re-writing it to make it good, I'll post it ASAP. |
| wyliecoyotesfriend Member Age: 14 Gender: Female Points: 100 | Which one? |
| Skiffle. Member Age: 12 Gender: Female Points: 100 | Done. I simply had to embarrass her again. Edit it in any way you like. I sat with my lunch for a while before I heard somebody approach. "Mind if I sit?" she asked. "Pull up a bench," I shrugged, moving along slightly. She sat next to me as I continued eating. I felt slightly embarrassed about eating in public, I just felt like a pig when I did. I took dainty bites (well, I attempted to) as I waited for Victoria to say something. "Whats up?" I raised an eyebrow. "There's this girl I think Cole likes..." she muttered. "Another Claire?" I asked sympathetically. "Nah..she's cool, that's what annoys me...Claire did piss me off too though...Meddling cow..." she replied. "Sucks...You friendly with her then? The chick, not Claire." I raised an eyebrow. "She said some funny stuff about Claire and I laughed but I was trying to be mean to make her back off or something. I just don't get how she got so close to him that quickly!" she explained. "She pretty?" I sighed. Victoria shrugged and crossed her arms in either an attempt to keep warm or a sign of annoyance. Sure, it was sometimes irritating when she talked about Cole...but she liked the guy. "What's the girl's name again?" I asked, figuring I might know her. "Hayley Conman," she replied "...You're gonna love me in a minute," I grinned, taking another bite of my sandwich. "Why?" she asked, smiling slightly. "Dude, it's his cousin," I snorted as her face lit up. After a short amount of silence she spoke again. "So why're you eating out here? Why not in the cafe?" she asked. "Don't wanna talk about it," I muttered, sipping my coffee, glancing at my watch. Said coffee was spat out once I saw what time it was, I was like. I muttered a quick goodbye, threw my trash in the bin and ran inside. I got to the elevator and jabbed at the button repeatedly and it lit up. I hopped on one leg to the other, practically praying for it to hurry up. When it finally arrived, I rushed in, fighting against the stampede of people on their way out. Eventually I got in and then all I could do was wait. I finally arrived in the office after five excruciating minutes of hearing the chiming of the bell as the elevator passed different floors. I rushed in, hoping I would be able to slip to my computer and go un-noticed but of course, the mega-beast had different ideas. "Jade, darling," she grinned in a threatening manner and motioned for me to approach her. She was always lurking in the shadows, waiting for somebody to slip up. Maybe she was on my floor because of some of the hot guys working there. "...Yes, Claire?" I asked, meekly. "You're a wimp!" I snarled at myself mentally. "Why are you late?" she asked, raising an eyebrow. "....There was a huge line at the cafe and I lost track of time. I'm terribly sorry, it won't happen again," I mumbled. She looked at me again, this time both her eyebrows were raised. She snorted. "Make sure it doesn't." I practically sprinted to my desk, happy for an escape. I got to my computer and sat with a sigh. "S'matter?" muttered Courtney. "Bad day, I guess," I replied, turning my computer on. "Jade? Sorry to make it even worse...but..." she trailed off, gesturing to my t-shirt. I looked down and felt my face go bright red. My t-shirt was covered in coffee. |
| Hot Diggety Member Age: 18 Gender: Female Points: 100 | I just tweeked a few sentences here and there, hope you don't mind. |
| wyliecoyotesfriend Member Age: 14 Gender: Female Points: 100 | I posted chapter six up ![]() Great job you two :cute: The edited one's pretty cool. Feel free to edit any of my crap! :XD |
| Hot Diggety Member Age: 18 Gender: Female Points: 100 | HAHA, I can't be bothered right now. I wanna make sure Lucy is ok with the edited version before we post it. I'm gonna start my chapter soon-ish. Promise. |
| Skiffle. Member Age: 12 Gender: Female Points: 100 | I love it! Seriously. Sorry for the shortness of my chapters, I just can't seem to write long ones for this story :/ |
