New Chapter

Hello, this is Chachi. I've finally got the new chapter out for my story. Thank you to all who read it. If you haven't yet, please do, and tell me what you think. I'd very much appreciate any sort of feedback, good or bad about my story. I'm my own worst critic, so I think I can take a chop to my self esteem. No worries about me.
I've been thinking of writing a new story. Originally, I was like "one story at a time! You're not superman!", but now I'm like "what the hey!"
Please give me feedback on if you'd like to read another story by me. I'd like to know if you're interested.
By the way, has anyone noticed that most of the places and people in my story actually exist? Yeah, Ft. Walton Beach, Lisa Jackson, they both exist. In Florida, too. Granted Lisa Jackson is a PREPARATORY ELEMENTARY AND MIDDLE school and not a high school, but the teacher Miss Starry is based off of an old art teacher I had...in Italy. Krystal is based off of me. I'm a military brat. Jason is based off of a friend, and Julian is based off of one of my favorite evil characters (I like the bad guys more than the good ones half the time... am I twisted?).
I tend to make characters based off of people I like. Hey! If you'd like to "be" in one of my stories, I wouldn't mind including you, too! I'm flexible with characters, but they DO tend to take over my life, if I let them...they talk to me...and things of the sort...am I insane?