Can you nice people on Mibba give me some advise?

I think that I will delete my story "They say its wrong, but what do we care?". I'm not sure. So you people that read it will you help me out? i don't really think that's good. i think that it was my first sex scene. I just think that its stupid. If you guys think that I should keep it and that its good tell me. i really need to know.


What the hell is with this!?!?! it tells me that this has to be 100 words! you know what fine I'm pissed off already.
So just because this has to be 100 words, I'll just wast your kind people's time.
I hate my mom, i hate my grand mum, i hate my aunt, i hate my uncle, i hate everyone in this dumb ass family. they all hate me, and i hate all of them.