Songwriting, ftl.
I'm having major lyric issues.
My friend came up with some amaaazing guitar riffs and chord progressions and whatnot..
So he asked me to write lyrics..
Meh.
Not going so well.
I've got some things...
Things floating around in my head:
He said "I love you" in big bold letters
I'd be a liar if I said it didn't mean a thing
and
Say what I need to hear
And all the things I never would have guessed
Say what I need to hear
Lie to me and tell me I'm the best
You've ever met
and
I'm so miserable without you, it's kind of like you're here
A mess I had to sweep under the rug for company's sake
Yeah. It's really freaking hard.
Anyone want to throw me a line?
I'm open for anything.
And if you happen to see potential in what I have, feel free to help expand or tell me what I should change. =]
[p.s. If it helps, I'm writing a song about lies, deceit, and being led on and let down.]
My friend came up with some amaaazing guitar riffs and chord progressions and whatnot..
So he asked me to write lyrics..
Meh.
Not going so well.
I've got some things...
Things floating around in my head:
He said "I love you" in big bold letters
I'd be a liar if I said it didn't mean a thing
and
Say what I need to hear
And all the things I never would have guessed
Say what I need to hear
Lie to me and tell me I'm the best
You've ever met
and
I'm so miserable without you, it's kind of like you're here
A mess I had to sweep under the rug for company's sake
Yeah. It's really freaking hard.
Anyone want to throw me a line?
I'm open for anything.
And if you happen to see potential in what I have, feel free to help expand or tell me what I should change. =]
[p.s. If it helps, I'm writing a song about lies, deceit, and being led on and let down.]
Posted on July 9th, 2008 at 12:11am


No, I truly appreciate it!!
Victoria Vixen., July 9th, 2008 at 03:01:25am
I think you should think of images that are personal to you...
What comes into your head when you think of lies, deceit? I get a few biblical images, I'd make references to those...
But you're not bad at all. ^_^
And I'm nowhere near amazing, so you probably shouldn't listen to me, but... eh, maybe I helped? Good luck ^_^
what the chipmunk?, July 9th, 2008 at 02:50:00am