A mini mibba poetry rant. Enjoy >.>' - Comments

  • Germ

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    Define original.
    December 16th, 2010 at 12:50am
  • flyer.

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    Lol, I said most...and if you read it, it's not about what you would think .
    My most original ones are probably Castles in the Sky, Try Again, Earth, Hurt (Yourself), and Look at Her.
    I didn't promise original titles, btw...just original content. Which I think is more important :)
    December 16th, 2010 at 12:02am
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    You've never seen a poem called 'emo girl? ._.
    December 15th, 2010 at 11:58pm
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    I can promise that most of my poems are original; I honestly don't think I've seen anything like them on Mibba :) They also don't rhyme xP
    December 15th, 2010 at 11:23pm
  • Germ

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    heh thanks for posting. they're fine.
    December 15th, 2010 at 08:21pm
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    Ugh, my shameless whoring annoys me o.O
    December 15th, 2010 at 07:53pm
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    Hey please read my stuff. I don't ever write angst soo ya please read them:)
    my favourites are definitely
    heartbeat
    utopia
    black rain
    sting like a bee
    my spit on your shoe
    the period poem
    prude and proud

    thanks!
    December 15th, 2010 at 07:51pm
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    mmmI particularly liked your use or rhyme with 'Iraq' and 'a rock'...also 'wow' 'now' 'now' and 'now'. It's not exactly twisted....it's sad, granted, the guy died and she re-married, then died. But yeah, nicely done.
    December 15th, 2010 at 07:29pm
  • stereophonics28

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    Check out my page. Some are cliche, but some; such as Dear Allen, are a bit twisted. :)
    December 15th, 2010 at 07:11pm