This isn't exactly a 'story' per say. It was the original draft of a chapter in one of my stories that I found after posting the said chapter with a completely different beginning. I changed the way this chapter was written and this beginning didn't fit into that anymore, though I felt it was written a bit better than what is actually posted. I wanted my readers to be able to see the change in this chapter because I wasn't a hundred percent certain that they would like the posted beginning better.
July 3rd, 2011 at 08:43am
