Is this still up for grabs? I'll swap for 635798 (in my signature). It's incredibly long, so I'm fine with you only reading the first 1-2 chapters. If it's still not up for grabs, I'll read and comment your story anyway. The title has me like O_O
I have a story of mine for you called The Impossible Game! It is a long story, so there's no way I'm expecting you to read it all (unless you want to, of course). However, I would prefer it if you could read at least one chapter from both halves of the story i.e. one of the chapters near the beginning and one of the chapters after the chapter named 'Impact'. It's just the story changes a lot from that point onwards.
I'll get reading your story right away, and I'll leave the comment on yours when I'm finished!
This is still up to do. Thank you for your comment. I will start on your story now!