PLEASE?!?

I need COMMENTS on my poems and Story!! PLEASE PLEASE! I NEED FEEDBACK! lolz im pathetic..... But yea i really need these cuz i wanna see if i am gonna continue my story or not or o if im gonna kee writting all together ... ik ik its wierd but ya know what? I like feedback ... that way i know if its bad or not i can just delete it and start over and over and over .... And ,, I like to comment other peoples things cuz im kewl like that, so if u do this for me then i will give u my opinion on ur stuff that u want me to give it on.... SO ya keep up the feedback in dear life of my account!