oh saturday, that means story updating time!

oh this'll be fun though this part is a bit short, I make up for that in an uber lonnnng part at I think part 4 or 5 so yeah I'm working hard on meh story hope ya like :) I actually put alot of last minute editing into all of these cuz, I think it needed it, and it made it a teansey longer, If I go and take from this site and ever publish, I'll probobly re edit again lolz :) hope you all like my work :) if I ever publish I'll have to take it down lolz so yeah love yas friends ~