this world we live in is based on insanity

Hi!I have written a bit of a song for my band but they don't really like it :( but I'm the bassist so i probably don't matter.They want to make money but I want to make a difference.
GODDAMMIT! What does YOU guys think.I like other opinions lol.It's called This World We Live In Is Based On Insanity.It's an upbeat song with a hugly strong base like like in The Sharpest Lives or the second verse of This Is How I Disappear and about the same speed as American Idiot.It's a pretty rad, insane song and it makes me feel very...strong and happy...for some crazy reason XD.Here it is:

This world we live in is based on insanity!
This wild feeling pulsing right through me!
Will anything matter in sixty years or so?!
HEY YOU!Would you expect any other proper way to go?!

The global warming it's gonna melt us
When the sun goes out who's gonna help us?
with everyone runnin' around as they now are!

Since we are the society of tomorrow
Let us share our dreams with the sorrowed
We ain't just playing this song to become stars!!

Now if you were able to speak up then tell me now
Don't just say "I hate you" because YOU are the stubborn cow
When it starts raining crimson blood from the sky
Don't tell me you'll be the one who locks yourself up and cries
(yeah, that's my job...HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!)

I'll add more when i think it up.
May 12th, 2007 at 11:50am