My first chapter of my first story! Yay!

Hi, thanks for click'n!
Okay, my first chapter for sixteen is up! Please read it! I'm so happy, and I'm working on the second! Well, at least brainstorming and going through ideas. I'm really, really excited, sorry, and again thanks if you looked at my first journal entry! And thanks for those of you for commenting!

As I said, I'm done with chapter one, so, I'm gonna be reading more! I read some people's stories, and there is so much talent on Mibba. My story's kind of, well, lame, and please, give me feedback and be honest, but be nice. I do NOT like mean or rude people....so....yeah.

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THANK YOUS!

-Marii :)