LAWL @ Twitter & Critique my writing?

1. Twitter.
I'm obsessed. Addicted.
It's bad. XD anyway, add me. I changed my username. again.
HaiileyMaii
=D

2. I have a new Original story,
and uhm, I was wondering if anyone wanted to give me critique on it?
=D It's be appreciated a lot. And yeah, be as harsh as you need, I can deal with it, haha.

I got my report card today.
School sucks. =/
2 B's and 2 C+'s.
Out of the whole year, my best mark was choir. XD
Yeah, makes me feel smart. I got 90% in it, though,. hahaha.
And I'm like 8 words short. Daaaamn.

I LOVE YOU.